Fic: Wrong

cleoius pointed out a Voltron fic to me. It was a K&A fic as so many voltron fics are. They pretend to be all romantic and on the side of nice those K&A folks do, but they are not above the rape porn. Allura often gets captured by Lotor in these sorts of fics; the author lovingly describes how she gets smacked around and sexually assaulted by him, but apparently, as long as the evil prince doesn't actually get his alien schlong into her before she is rescued by Keith then no harm, no foul.

Rarely is there a good reason given for why Lotor does not indulge himself instead of just titillating the readers, and this particular K&A fic is no exception. In the fic, Lotor strips her, fondles her, drugs her, and is all-around delightfully nasty, but, somehow, is not quite nasty enough to go all the way. cleoius and I both agreed that the fic could use a reinterpretation in which Lotor was more accurately characterized. This is the fic that resulted.

ETA: This is also my first attempt at 'head hopping'. The technique is widely reviled even when it is a technique, but it's very effective for romance and I wanted to give it a try.

( This is non-con PORN and should not be read by anyone )