botias | Writing Stuff (Reply)

I went back and read through chapters 1-8 or so of Between Two Evils in an attempt to get back in the groove. Frankly, it cries out desperately for a beta reader and maybe a plot. And maybe I'm just not in the right mood, but it seemed kind of awful and doesn't start to pick up IMO until they get to Nephalem. I apologize for the lack of plot dear readers! This is what happens when you set out to write some crack, become self-conscious somewhere along the way, and fail to come up with a plot line or two. Persephone began much the same way, but I was happily provided with circumstances which saved the fic from utter suckage: 1) I had the bestest beta reader EVER in the history of the universe 2) Buffy still has to save Sunnydale from the forces of evil which gives her something somewhat interesting to do while she 3) figures out where Spike is going to fit into the picture as he 4) figures out same.

I do plan to keep going with BTE. :/ It is getting better. I think. *flails*