Aug. 5th, 2008

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Chapter 6 is very close to being completed. Hopefully it won't stay that way for much longer. I get hung up on the sex stuff sometimes, and, well, there's a lot of sex in chapter 6. I do plan to get around to some plot sooner or later, honestly. In the meantime, here's the beginning of Chapter 5 as I originally wrote it. At the time, I thought it was important for him to actually get genuinely annoyed/angry with her, but now... maybe not. Also, it is OOC for Allura to run from Lotor unless she's also running to something.

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Go read this BtVS fic by [livejournal.com profile] resolute. It is lovely--complex and simple at the same time, which probably means she used just as many words as she needed. Probably the most under-sung POV in the Buffyverse.

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