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This is VERY short. Sorry!

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Chapter 21


“I'm fine,” Keith kept his attention on the observation window until the hovering young medic departed.

He was fine, physically. He had returned unscathed a second time from the planet that devoured so many. Maybe he should set up a tour service. Anger rose up, a fresh, hot wave; his fingers clenched tight on the mug someone had pressed on him.

There must be places he should be, other than this hallway in Trauma Med holding a drink he didn't want, but he could be useful to someone here in spite of the fact that he had driven a sword through her shoulder.

She didn't share a common language with him, didn’t know his name, but she had caught hold of him when he'd tried to leave, and she kept checking to see that he was still present if no longer at her side. He could understand that. Compared to all the other people on Arus, he was her oldest friend. He held her copper gaze while they sealed, scanned and injected. He kept expecting to see accusation there.

Again someone came to stand beside him.

This time it was not someone he could dismiss. Keith glanced at his commander’s reflection in the observation window before returning his gaze to the patient within.

“How is she?”

Keith tensed at the quiet words. In the confusion of his unannounced arrival with a gravely wounded young woman, they had hardly spoken, but one look from beneath thunderous brows had communicated a world of wrath.

“She's expected to make a full recovery,” Keith said, after a moment. “One of the volunteers actually speaks her language. They’re waiting for him before they go any further.”

Keith had known what the consequences would be when he had awakened Black Lion in the dark of night, pointed her toward Doom and let her fly.

The consequences were pathetic. Coran could not replace him, not with Allura gone. The only question really, was how much of Coran's anger was because of his unauthorized rescue mission, and how much was because the mission had failed. He had seen the hope on the older man's face when he had first arrived with a woman in his arms. He had grown up with military leaders, disciplined and often reserved. His commander on Arus was much like them, one of the most reserved people he had ever met. To see Coran be cracked open like that, and then to watch that hope die...

“Did you accomplish anything? Anything at all?” Coran’s voice was pitched low, due to their lack of privacy, but it did nothing to lessen the force of his demand.

What had he accomplished except to put them all at risk?

“I have some intelligence,” Keith said, at last. Congratulations are in order... You're in love with her. Aren't you? Keith gazed unseeing at the mug in his hand and felt the weight of his actions multiply, pushing him down until he felt pinned in place.

Voices from the room brought his head up. There was a new person there now, a sturdy man with hair and skin in shades of autumn; he was talking earnestly with the woman whose blood still stained his skin, his clothes. She listened, very serious. Then her expression changed, tension falling away. Her eyes sought his again as she lay back against the pillows.

Keith found the corner of his mouth turning up. His return from Doom was no miracle, but hers... He smiled then, really smiled, in spite of his heartache and exhaustion, in spite of the part of him that wondered what his failure would mean for them all.

Lance was always telling him that he needed to focus on the positive.

Well?

“You were right, Coran. Lotor is planning to use the lions for his own purposes.”

“What is it? How do you know?”

Keith took a sip of his drink. It was still hot, prickling his tongue. He turned his head and met his commander's haunted gaze. “Because I'm still alive.”



On to Chapter 22

Date: 2013-06-27 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wellreadsith.livejournal.com
This was a pleasant surprise.

Gracias

Date: 2013-06-27 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] botias.livejournal.com
Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it. :)

Date: 2013-06-28 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
*gasp* Oh my! Thank you. That's all I going to say.

Date: 2013-06-30 07:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] botias.livejournal.com
You're welcome. :)

Date: 2013-07-15 03:05 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I am Glad to see your writing again?Is Keith just lying to coran about the him Lotor to use the Lions wait until coran finds out that she is expecting! Thank you for posting this!

Date: 2013-07-26 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] botias.livejournal.com
Thanks! Hopefully I will be able to answer your questions in future chapters. I'm sure an expecting Allura will be big news for many people. ;)

Date: 2013-07-26 02:40 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Awesome! Thank you for Posting another chapter.

Date: 2013-07-26 04:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] botias.livejournal.com
You're welcome.

Date: 2013-08-01 04:44 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Thanks for the new chapter. I always check everyday in the hope of an update. I was pleasantly surprised by this one and read as quick as I could. I'm a little sad that it is short and that there wasn't any Lotor/Allura interaction but I am still very grateful for this chapter. Thank you and pleas update soon.

Date: 2013-08-18 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] botias.livejournal.com
Thanks! I know what you mean about the dearth of our fav couple. At least it's short.

Date: 2013-08-18 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pierma29.livejournal.com
I am so excited another chapter is up. I was wondering why he kept the Voltron members alive or ship them off the planet. Because, I can not see him keeping them alive/around just for Allura's sake. Can not wait for more! Keep up the great work!

Date: 2013-08-19 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] botias.livejournal.com
I agree. I don't think Lotor's nearly that nice. ;) Thanks for commenting!

Date: 2015-11-18 03:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] botias.livejournal.com
I posted another chapter to Between Two Evils. Case you still were interested after all this time.
http://botias.livejournal.com/232721.html

Date: 2013-12-18 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tenjp.livejournal.com
I never saw this! Thank you :-) Poor Keith and good job Lance...apparently he is ever the optimist.

Date: 2014-01-09 05:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] botias.livejournal.com
Hi there! Sorry this is such a late response. Glad you liked it, though it's very short.

Date: 2014-04-15 12:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] Мария Огаревская (from livejournal.com)
Thanks for your fiction. wery nice. I read everything today.Waiting for continue. Sorry my bad English.

Date: 2014-07-27 03:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] botias.livejournal.com
Sorry for my late response. But I'm glad you let me know you liked it.

Awesome!

Date: 2014-07-25 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Hi! I'm a fan of your fic from New Zealand :)
I have really enjoyed reading the story so far. When I was younger Prince Lotor was my big blue alien crush!
You have a lovely way of story telling. I can't wait to read more, I really hope you will continue on with this story.

I just love this!
from Kiwi

Re: Awesome!

Date: 2014-07-27 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] botias.livejournal.com
Thanks for letting me know! Believe it or not, this fic is still on my mind. I hope I continue it too. :)

Tenjo

Date: 2014-08-12 03:59 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
hey :) In case you ever want to write more..this fic is not forgotten :)
Julie

Re: Tenjo

Date: 2015-11-18 01:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] botias.livejournal.com
OMG, I wrote another chapter to Between Two Evils.

Date: 2015-02-16 02:31 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Just found this story the other day and started reading and noticed the dates posted:-( guilty pleasure I couldn't stop reading. Love it! Chap 22??!! What happens next?

Date: 2015-09-10 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] botias.livejournal.com
Thanks so much for letting me know. :)

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